Cute and funny! Super matrix lemmings XD
I love lemmings to no end. I however am incredibly particular about saving absolutely every little lemming I can, so if there is any way to save 100%, I will do it. This flash is hilarious. It's incredibly creative. I love how you opened it with traditional lemmings situations, and then the one survivor was... well... rofl, a *survivor*!!!! ROFL it'd be a funny twist in the end, when you finish it, when you have him exit, and it says, "You were supposed to get 80%. You only got 20%. Sorry." and you have to start over again XDDDDD
A Lot of Potential
It's good, and it looks clever, though you made them both look like adults, with their body sizes and proportions. I thought that was Mirai and Goku, and then realized it was supposed to be young (chibi) Trunks and Goten, and I was like WTF, oh maybe they're adults here in some parallel universe or something??
But anyway, I like the super saiyan hair effect. Good work with that. Just keep in mind chibi characters are suppoed to be small and their heads are supposed to be like, 1/4 the size of their body.
Im keeping that in mind and I will try making them shorter
It Was Good, but Short
This was really cute while it lasted. I really like your style, and especially your color choices, and such. You obviously have a lot of talent. I just hope maybe you could add onto this, and kinda show what happens to the big fish. It'd be a better (and hopefully longer) story.
Oh man, I was cracking up as I saw this. This is just too cute and clever, and HAHAHA, omg TOADSTOOL!!!! When he came into the spotlight and was like, "My friend's got a boyfriend" and I realized, he was taking Peach's side, omg. I was just rolling on the floor.
This was just fantastic. Absolutely brilliant! X)
Those were some ingenious moves that character pulled there. You made it look easy to go through an obstacle course like that!! OMG if only I had those mad skillz when playing Mario!
I love your character design for the fox (or should I say vixen? your fox looked very feminine). It's a beautiful short, and your butterfly is incredibly magical. I love how you handled the fluttering of its wings. It's so gorgeous. Wow, I wish I could see the cels for this and see it in color, but there's also something incredibly mysterious about seeing it in pencil. Seeing the outline gives it a lot more emotion and movement. It's absolutely gorgeous. This is a great piece.
I love the song in the background too, though I wish it went somewhere. The simplicity is really beautiful, but i wonder if there is another part of the song that changes key or does something different for when the fox has a breakdown in front of the mirror?
Great job. I really like this.
That was INTENSE...
It usually takes a movie a long time to work up a horror scene. It's hard to get people really involved, but the music you chose for this... it was just boggling. It was like the music raped my ears... That's the best word I can say. It raped me, it completely violated me, but in a good way! (if that could be good). It completely achieved the effect it was going for. Man, I felt chills. That was insane... That was really really really intense...
OMG That was freakin' scary
No flash has ever given me the chills like this did. The soundtrack is incredible... This scared me more than any horror film I've seen since I was just a little girl. I'm so glad I didn't watch this late at night and in the dark, by myself, because I know I'd have nightmares. This is incredible. You really managed to manipulate visual and aural art to make this amazing piece. Great job. The only thing I would suggest, as constructive criticism, is to end with the lamp scene. The floating head kinda takes away from the creepiness that the lamp gives. Man, I purposely joined Newgrounds after years of coming here, just so I could review your piece. Amazing work! Congratulations X)
you joined just to review me? wow, thanks! glad you liked it.
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