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A Lot of Potential

It's good, and it looks clever, though you made them both look like adults, with their body sizes and proportions. I thought that was Mirai and Goku, and then realized it was supposed to be young (chibi) Trunks and Goten, and I was like WTF, oh maybe they're adults here in some parallel universe or something??

But anyway, I like the super saiyan hair effect. Good work with that. Just keep in mind chibi characters are suppoed to be small and their heads are supposed to be like, 1/4 the size of their body.

NekoLynx responds:

Im keeping that in mind and I will try making them shorter

It Was Good, but Short

This was really cute while it lasted. I really like your style, and especially your color choices, and such. You obviously have a lot of talent. I just hope maybe you could add onto this, and kinda show what happens to the big fish. It'd be a better (and hopefully longer) story.

Poison-Rat responds:

Hi Laura!

OMG That was freakin' scary

No flash has ever given me the chills like this did. The soundtrack is incredible... This scared me more than any horror film I've seen since I was just a little girl. I'm so glad I didn't watch this late at night and in the dark, by myself, because I know I'd have nightmares. This is incredible. You really managed to manipulate visual and aural art to make this amazing piece. Great job. The only thing I would suggest, as constructive criticism, is to end with the lamp scene. The floating head kinda takes away from the creepiness that the lamp gives. Man, I purposely joined Newgrounds after years of coming here, just so I could review your piece. Amazing work! Congratulations X)

AnimusImperium responds:

you joined just to review me? wow, thanks! glad you liked it.

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